The Mystery of Pueblo de los Muertos
*Thunder*
?: Wait! Please stop!
??: Sayonara Kane!
*Gun Shot*
The next morning.
Amy: When I find you Ace I’m gonna kick you so hard you’ll *Scream*
Ace: What’s wrong Amy!?
Amy: *Points Down*
Ace: Get the police!
Cop 1: Can any of you identify the body?
Ace: He’s our friend, his name is, uh was Kane.
Cop 1: Do any of you know who would’ve done this?
Kane: *Moans weakly in agony*
Cop 2: Save your strength. We need to get him to the Doctor fast!
Doctor: No need. The Doctor has arrived!
Ace and Amy: Thank god.
Ace: How long Doc?
Doctor: Five days, no more no less. Now go away.
Ace: Thanks Doc.
Amy: Do you really think we should leave Kane and the Doctor alone? I mean what if the murderer comes back to finish the job?
Ace: Don’t worry Amy whoever did this is not going to get away with it!
Amy: Yeah! You’re right we’ll catch the murderer.
Ace: Let’s go home, its gonna be a long five days.
Narrator: So the siblings left the Doctor to save Kane’s life, but can the Doctor be trusted? He showed up knowing exactly where they were.
6 Comments
is this happening in a street? how would a doctor show up so quickly?
The Doctor probably arrived in an ambulance… or a hot rod.
I like that the narrator says at the end “So the siblings left the Doctor to save Kane’s life, but can the Doctor be trusted? He showed up knowing exactly where they were.”I would have never have thought of that.
WOAH! it left me with chills :O
Is kane one of the protagonists close friends? Or are you foreshadowing that hes a enemy?
I like how you included stage directions. Well done!